2. Table 1.18b
Source Language Target Language
Reconstruction O deadly sin, O
rude unthankfulness.
Oh dosa
Rasa terima kasih yang
kasar. Oh
dosa, Rasa
tidak bersyukur
b. Communication-based Error
Referred to sixteen texts above, there are cases of errors on resulted from strategies of communication and all the errors made by the translator is caused by
communication-based error because some words have the same meaning but different use, so the translator have the difficulty in differing them. Besides that,
there are some words which have special meaning compatible in Shakespeare play dictionary. Then the translator makes over improvisation or modification in
translating the texts. Here are the examples from the subtitle texts:
1. Table 1.1b
2. Table 1.3b
Source Language Target Language
Reconstruction Put
up your
sword. Kenakan pedangmu.
Kenakan pistolmu jenis: sword.
3. Table 1.4b
Source Language Target Language
Reconstruction
Give me my long sword, ho
Berikan pedang
panjangku
Berikan laras
panjangku jenis:
Long sword. Source Language
Target Language Reconstruction
From ancient grudge break
to new
mutiny.
Mulai dari
pertentangan kuno, berubah
melawan kekakuan hukum.
Dari pertentangan kuno
berubah
menjadi pemberontakan
baru.
4. Table 1.7b
Source Language Target Language
Reconstruction
Thus then
in brief: The valiant
Paris seeks you for his love.
Baru teringat: Paris yang
gagah menyukaimu.
intinya: Paris yang gagah
menyukaimu.
5. Table 1.8b
Source Language Target Language
Reconstruction
Women grow by men.
Wanita besar karena pria.
Wanita mengandung karena
pria.
6. Table 1.9b
Source Language
Target Language Reconstruction
Make a mutiny among
my guests?
Kau mau membuat keributan di pestaku.
Kau mau membuat keributan
ditengah tamu-tamuku?
7. Table 1.12b
Source Language
Target Language Reconstruction
I have nights cloak to hide
me from their eyes, and but
thou love me, let them find
me here. Malam
menyelubungiku dari penglihatan mereka,
kecuali
kau mencintaiku, biarkan
mereka menemukanku.
Malam menyelubungiku dari
penglihatan mereka, jika
kau mencintaiku, biarkan
mereka menemukanku.
8. Table 1.14b
Source Language
Target Language Reconstruction
A challenge, on my life.
Tantangan hidup
atau mati.
Sebuah tantangan
dalam hidupku.