4. Table 1.7b
Source Language Target Language
Reconstruction
Thus then
in brief: The valiant
Paris seeks you for his love.
Baru teringat: Paris yang
gagah menyukaimu.
intinya: Paris yang gagah
menyukaimu.
5. Table 1.8b
Source Language Target Language
Reconstruction
Women grow by men.
Wanita besar karena pria.
Wanita mengandung karena
pria.
6. Table 1.9b
Source Language
Target Language Reconstruction
Make a mutiny among
my guests?
Kau mau membuat keributan di pestaku.
Kau mau membuat keributan
ditengah tamu-tamuku?
7. Table 1.12b
Source Language
Target Language Reconstruction
I have nights cloak to hide
me from their eyes, and but
thou love me, let them find
me here. Malam
menyelubungiku dari penglihatan mereka,
kecuali
kau mencintaiku, biarkan
mereka menemukanku.
Malam menyelubungiku dari
penglihatan mereka, jika
kau mencintaiku, biarkan
mereka menemukanku.
8. Table 1.14b
Source Language
Target Language Reconstruction
A challenge, on my life.
Tantangan hidup
atau mati.
Sebuah tantangan
dalam hidupku.
9. Table 1.15b
Source Language
Target Language Reconstruction
Mercutios soul is but a little
way above our heads
staying for thine to keep
him company Jiwa
Mercutio
sedikit diatas kepala kita.
Diam untuk
milikmu dan
menemaninya
Jiwa Mercutio dekat diatas kepala kita.
Diam untuk milikmu dan menemaninya
10. Table 1.16b
Source Language
Target Language Reconstruction
Tybalt hit the life
of stout Mercutio.
Tybalt
menembak
Mercutio yang
berani. Tybalt
membunuh
Mercutio yang
berani.
c. Overgeneralization
The writer finds out that there is case of error on word order and the error
made by the translator on this problem is caused by Overgeneralization.
Overgeneralization may also become the result of immediate communication strategy. Indonesian word order is different from English word order. For
example, beautiful you are it should be you are beautiful . Here the example from the subtitle texts:
1. Table 1.11
Source Language Target Language
Reconstruction
Art thou
not
Romeo and
a Montague?
Kau bukan Romeo seorang Montague?
Bukankah kau
Romeo seorang
Montague?