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column, indicates that a text produced and appeared based on both translation is considered equivalent. Therefore, the changes of title are considered effective as
well. The equivalence takes for the same meanings implied for each element analyzed while the effectiveness takes for a text translation both English and
Indonesian translation has achieved a text purpose—that is giving factual information until convincing receivers for its validity—and the expectations of
Field, Mode and Tenor which is register completely register for a text.
The second analysis would give room for quality assessment translation in acceptability which is the strategy process in translating by considering the
understanding or response of the audience. This term was in the continuum strategy to check whether or not the translation from SL to TL can be accepted, as
valid or invalid translation. Thus, the writer adapted and used Nababan’s score indicator from The Translation Theory translated 1999.
Table 4.1.Nababan’s Indicator of Acceptability modified Scale
Score Acceptability
Category Acceptability Indicator
1.00 – 1.5
1 Acceptable
The TL title is understood by target readership and naturally
translated in Indonesian.
1.6 – 2.00
2 Less Acceptable
The TL title is not understood by target readership and not matched
with the content of blurb.
According to the indicator score above, to apply it to questionnaire forms would be like table 4.3. There was an additional column of comment which
functions as the respondents’ reasons of giving particular score that is not
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applicable to other to scores given to the same data as consideration of supplementary analysis.
Table 4.3.Example of the questionnaires written in Indonesian [translated back in English]
Kode Code
Judul Title of Book
Nilai Score
1 2
1STTh GTL
Mengungkit Pembunuhan Prying the Murder
Isi Cerita Content: Hasrat Amyas Cralepada lukisan dan wanita membuat namanya terkenal. Namun pembunuhan atas dirinya
membuat namanya tercemar. Enam belas tahun kemudian istrinya yang cemburu dituduh dan dijatuhi hukuman seumur hidup karena
pembunuhan yang menggemparkan. Kini Carla, putri mereka, wanita muda yang yakin ibunya tidak bersalah, menghadapkan
Hercule Poirot pada tantangan yang menggoda: memulihkan nama baik ibunya dengan kembali ke tempat terjadinya pembunuhan dan
mencari kekurangan fatal pada kejahatan yang sempurna itu.
AmyasCrale’s murder made a fuss in city and put him in a bad name. Until 16 years later, his jealous wife was accused and
sentenced to life due to the shocking homicide. It was all left to Carla, the Crale’sdaughter, who was certain that her mother was
innocence. She confronted HerculePoirot to the tempting challenge: cleaned her mother’s name by coming back to the homicide scene
and searched for fatal absence in that perfect crime.
Catatan Note:
In which,
NilaiScore 1:berterima the data is acceptable for target readership Nilai Score 2: kurang berterima the data is less acceptable for target
readership
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