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a. Using picture series as the media
The  use  of  picture  series  as  the  media successfully increased the students’
interest  in  learning  writing.  Picture  series  also  helped  the  students  in  generating and  developing  their  idea.  However,  their  writing  content  was  still  below  the
expectation since they still had limited supporting ideas in their writing.
b. Providing grammar exercise
A  varied  activity  of  learning  was  applied  by  providing  the  students  with combined  exercises  with  picture  series  and  game.  Combining  grammar  exercise
and game successfully improved the students’ interest in learning, although some obstacles  appeared.  The  students  only  focused  on  playing  the  game,  instead  of
learning  the  material.  It  caused  their  grammar  mastery  was  not  successfully improved.  It  also  consumed  too  much  time  to  discuss  the  material  and  give
feedback to the students. Moreover,  based on the students’ writing production in
post-test, it could be  seen that they still  made errors and  mistakes  in  subject and verb  agreement,  capitalization,  punctuation,  and  determining  the  change  of  verb
from present form  into past  form, especially  irregular verb. However, this action should be implemented in the next cycle since the students’ still had inadequate
grammar mastery.
c. Providing vocabulary exercise
Providing  vocabulary  exercise  combined  with  picture  series  successfully improved  the  students’  interest  in  learning.  The  students  actively  involved  in
learning  activities,  such  as,  discussion,  question  and  answer,  and  guessing  the
78 meaning  of  words  in  a  series  of  pictures.  Their  vocabulary  range  had  widened.
However, some of them still had frequent errors in spelling.
d. Giving prizes
Giving prizes  in each game played during the teaching and  learning process had improved students’ interest in learning. They actively involved and competed
in doing the exercise.
e. Giving feedback to students’ writing
Giving feedback to students writing was very useful in improving students’ awareness and confident in writing. It was also applied as a reminder for them of
their errors and mistakes. The  table  below  shows  the  findings  of  Cycle  1  and  the  recommendations  for
Cycle 2.
Table 10: The conclusions of actions in Cycle 1 No.  Actions in Cycle 1
Reflections in Cycle 1 Recommendations for
Cycle 2
1.  - Implementing
picture series as the media
- Combining
picture series with learning
activities -
The implementation of picture series as the
media successfully improved students’
interest in learning writing.
- The learning activities
became more varied. -
Picture series helped the students in
generating and developing their idea
and put the event in correct order.
- The student still had
limited number of supporting idea in their
writing. -
This action should be continued in the next
cycle.
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79 2.
Providing grammar exercise
- Providing grammar
exercise combined with picture series and
games raised students’ interest in learning.
However, the students still considered that
grammar was difficult skill to learn.  They
only focused on playing the game,
instead of learning the material.
- The students still had
inadequate grammar mastery.
- Grammar exercises
consumed too much time.
- Grammar exercise
would be combined with vocabulary
exercise to save the time.
- The number of
grammar exercise should be increased.
3. Providing
vocabulary exercise
- Providing vocabulary
exercise combined with picture series and
games increased students’ interest in
learning. -
The students’ vocabulary skill range
was widened. However, they still
made frequent errors in capitalization,
punctuation, and spelling.
- Vocabulary exercise
would be combined with grammar
exercise to save the time.
4. Giving prizes
- The students were
interested and actively involved in the learning
activities. -
This action should be continued in the next
cycle.
5. Giving feedback to
students’ writing -
The students’ awareness and
confident in writing was improved.
- The students were able
to know and study from their mistakes and
errors in their writing -
This action should be continued in the next
cycle.
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