The Evaluation of the Final Draft The Revision of the Final Draft
a Unit 1, Public Places
There was a revision in this unit related to the appearance. The punctuation in each task was revised and added. Some symbols were not appropriate for book
materials; they were not formally used in a book material so the symbols were changed into the formal one.
b Unit 2, Recreation Equipment
There were some revisions in this unit related to the picture. In Part 2 task 1, the pictures’ size were not appropriate to the kindergarten children, they were still
too small so the pictures needed to be made into the bigger one. The other revision was in Part 5 Task 1 related to the task. The task was too easier to the children in
class B so the task was revised to make it appropriate for children in class B. c
Unit 3, Kinds of Profession The first revision there was an addition material in this unit. The addition
was a song in part 2. The song was chosen for supporting the previous task. The next revision was added the phonetic transcription for each vocabulary.
d Unit 4, My Universe
Some revisions were done in this unit related with the input of the tasks. The first revision was to revise the task instruction in Part 3. The next revision was in
Part 2 Task 3. The task was moved into Part 3 to make it effective for the children because they took long time to color it.