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CHAPTER IV RESEARCH FINDINGS AND INTERPRETATION
This chapter presents research findings before, during, and after the implementation of classroom action research to improve students discussion text
writing skills through teacher indirect feedback technique and also interpretation of
the results.
A. Research Findings
1. Findings before the Implementation of CAR
Before implementing the research, any kinds of information were gathered through teacher pre-interview, pre-questionnaire, pre-observation, and also pre-
action test.
a. Result of Interview
The English teacher was interviewed on Tuesday, June 24, 2014 at 10 am. It was done to know generally the class situation,
students’ achievement, and also students’ and teachers’ attitude toward the teaching and learning process of writing.
Three problems were pointed ou t based on teacher’s interview. Firstly, problem
mentioned was that the students sometimes had not yet been interested to prepare what they were going to write; they preferred talking and joking with their friends
until the class ended. They argued that they were depressed while working under pressure, and needed a lot of time to get the inspiration and the data needed. Thus,
it was hard for them to collect their work in the end of the meeting and for the teacher to directly correct their work. Secondly, after the writing tasks became a
homework, the teacher found that the students had not yet put their best performance in their writing. They just wrote what they wanted to write, neglected
the text structure, and put little attention about what they wrote which led to some problems, for example, grammatical errors. It is true that they had not yet interested
in writing because of its complexity. Thus, there were so many students that were hard to achieve minimum mastery criterion KKM made by the teacher. Lastly, the
teacher said that it had been so hard when her students asked her to give them
reasons for their score since she just gave them the score without any comments or feedback. Moreover, she argued that it took a lot of time to give them comments to
each work since she taught more than three class per week. As a result, students became unmotivated since some of them felt like they were hard to have clear
direction about how to write well, and some others felt like their teacher had not yet found appropriate techniques to improve their skills.
It could be concluded that four aspects need considering; they are students’ preparation to write, diligence in doing writing tasks, involvement while learning
writing skills, submission punctuality.
b. Result of Pre-Observation
Pre-observation was conducted to observe the process of pre-action writing test before implementing the action. It was held on Tuesday, January 6
th
, 2015, and started from 07.00
—08.30 a.m. The class consisted of 31 students; 17 male students and 14 female students. Below is the result of pre-observation.
Table 4.1 Results of Pre-Observation Sheets
Students’ Number Diligence Submission Punctuality S1
2 3
S2
2 3
S3 3
3
S4 2
3
S5 2
3
S6 2
3
S7
2 3
S8 2
3
S9 1
3
S10 2
3
S11 2
3
S12 2
3
Students’ Number Diligence Submission Punctuality S13
2 3
S14 1
3
S15 1
3
S16 3
3
S17 2
3
S18
2 3
S19 2
3
S20 2
3
S21 2
3
S22 2
3
S23
2 3
S24 1
3
S25 3
3
S26 1
3
S27 1
3
S28
2 3
S29 3
3
S30 2
3
S31 2
3
Each Aspect’s Score Total
60 93
Percentage 64.52
100
Overall Aspects’ Score Total
153
Percentage
82.26
Based on the result of pre-observation above, generally, it could be concluded
that the teaching and learning process was Very Good. However, the description
could be seen in one aspect, submission punctuality. Another aspect, students’
diligence, could actually be concluded that they are diligent enough. Most students seriously did the test though teacher should always supervise what they were doing.
Moreover, based on teacher’s observation journal, some students sitting in the first two front rows seriously did the test. However, those sitting in the next rows
should always be supervised. Then if the teacher did not pay attention or supervise them, some students preferred to play games on their smartphone than to do the
test. For example, four students in the right corner preferred to play games on their smartphone than to do the test. Besides of that, they also liked to chat with their
friends during the test. For example, five female students sitting in the third and fourth row near the door liked to chat during the test. Lastly, some students tended
to do the test with their friends in group rather than work individually. In conclusion, generally, they are diligent enough in doing the test though some of
them really needed supervising.
c. Pre-Action Test
Lastly, pre-action test was done in January 6, 2015 at 07.00 —8.30 a.m. This
test was actually conducted in order to mainly prove what the teacher had said about the class situation when writing test being conducted and about students’
achievement which were found below the standard. Findings showed that almost half of the class could not reach the Minimum Mastery Criterion 75. Below is the
students’ pre-action writing test scores:
Table 4.2 Students’ Pre-Action Writing Test Scores
Students’ Number Scores
Number of Words S1
73 231
S2 76
247
S3 86
297
S4
61 253
S5
79 289
S6 78
247
Students’ Number Scores
Number of Words S7
77 260
S8 75
257
S9 57
225
S10 72
290
S11 73
220
S12
71 283
S13 73
281
S14 53
254
S15 68
280
S16 86
226
S17
74 292
S18 72
267
S19 72
239
S20 77
245
S21 74
241
S22
72 251
S23 78
289
S24 63
262
S25 82
243
S26 59
288
S27
57 294
S28 69
242
S29 81
296
S30 73
235
S31 74
287
Mean:
72.1 261.65
Students who could pass the Minimum Mastery Criterion 75
Based the result of pre-action test, it could be concluded that there were still 20 students having not yet met the Minimum Mastery Criterion 75. The minimum
score gained was 53, while the highest was 86. From the data above, it could be concluded that students of XII IPA 4 needed to improve their writing skills. Besides
of that, the range number of words students could write was between 220 —297
words, with the average number of words students could produce was 262 261.65. Then, as the test was also designed to standardise the range number of words for
the next cycles, the researcher decided the range number of words between 200 —
300 words.
2. Findings during the Implementation of CAR