“OBSERVE IT” “LET’S CREATE”
It was revised, “Let’s Listen” and “Let’s Read”
It was revised, “Let’s Speak” and “Let’s Write”
Task 1 No revision
Task 2
“These” becomes “The”
Task 3
Misspelled the word “coloumn”. It becomes “column”.
Task 4 No revision
Task 5 No revision
Task 6 No revision
Task 7 A g
rammar mistake. “advantageous” becomes “advantages”.
Omitted “that” in the sentence “What kind of technique that is called double
cleansing?”. There is no blank space for the answer.
Task 8 No revision
Task 9 A g
rammar mistakes. “.... explanation about Procedure text...” becomes ““....
explanation about a Procedure text...” Omitted “to” in the sentence “You can ask
to your teacher ...”.
Task 10 No revision
Task 11 No revision
Task 12 No revision
Task 13 In the answer sheetrubric, it becomes
guided. Fill in blanks sentences.
Task 14 More guided speaking production.
Task 15
A grammar mistake in sentence “In having facial, there are steps must be followed”,
becomes “In having facial, there are steps that must be followed”,
Task 16 No revision
Task 17 No revision
Task 18
No revision
Task 19 No revision
Task 20 An article added and there is a grammar
mistake in sentence “It is a type of
sentence that are used...”. It becomes “It is a type of sentence that is used...”.
Task 21
A grammar mistake in sentence “The manuscript of the video that already
reorganized is provided for you.”, becomes “The manuscript of the video that is
already reorganized is provided for you.”.
Task 22
No revision
Task 23 No revision
Task 24 No revision
Task 25 No revision
Task 26 No revision
Homework
The tables’ shape were revised. There is a grammar mistake as in sentence “Does
anyone can help me?”. It becomes “Do anyone can help me?”.
Summary No revision
Reflection
No revision
E. UNIT 2
Part of a Unit Revisions
The first page of the unit: -
The tables of “English for Beauty Skin Care Programme”, and “Grade Eleven”
The tables were deleted. It was revised with the table in the second page of the
unit called Unit Title.
The objectives of the unit No revision
In the second page of the unit: “In this unit, you will:...”
“In this unit, there are activities you will do, such as:
” “OBSERVE IT”
“LET’S CREATE”
It was revised, “Let’s Listen” and “Let’s Read”
It was revised, “Let’s Speak” and “Let’s Write”
Task 1
No revision
Task 2
A grammar mistake in sentence “ ...to know about the problems to take care your
skin.” Becomes “...to know about the problems to take care of your skin.”
Task 3 No revision
Task 4 No revision
Task 5 No revision
Task 6 No revision
Task 7 In the answer sheet, there are answer
guidances.
Task 8 No revision
Task 9 No revision
Task 10
No revision
Task 11
In the answer sheet, there are answer guidances.
Task 12 Addition
task: students
create a
monologue about information stated on the box.
Task 13 Addition task: students make their own
report about two items they choose in task 12.
Task 12 becomes Task 14 No revision
Task 13 becomes Task 15
No revision
Task 14 becomes Task 16
No revision
Task 15 becomes Task 17 The form of activity was revised. A text
from task 14 was added.
Task 16 becomes Task 18 No revision
Task 17 becomes Task 19 No revision
Task 18 becomes Task 20 The explanation of the Passive Voice is
gathered.
Task 19 becomes Task 21 No revision
Task 20 becomes Task 22 No revision
Task 21 becomes Task 23 The form of activity was changed.
Task 22 becomes Task 24
The passsive voice explanation is gathered in task 20.
Then, it was revised by giving another activity. Students need to complete the
paragraph using passive voice.
Task 23 becomes Task 25 The task is added into creating stage.
Task 24 becomes Task 26 No revision
Task 25 becomes Task 27 No revision
Homework No revision
Summary
No revision
Reflection
No revision
F. UNIT 3
Part of a Unit Revisions
The first page of the unit: -
The tables of “English for Beauty Skin Care Programme”, and “Grade Eleven”
The tables were deleted. It was revised with the table in the second page of the
unit called Unit Title.
The objectives of the unit
No revision
In the second page of the unit: “In this unit, you will:...”
“In this unit, there are activities you will do, such as:
” “OBSERVE IT”
“LET’S CREATE”
It was revised, “Let’s Listen” and “Let’s Read”
It was revised, “Let’s Speak” and “Let’s Write”
Task 1 No revision
Task 2 No revision
Task 3 No revision
Task 4
No revision
Task 5 No revision
Task 6 No revision
Task 7 No revision
Task 8 No revision
Task 9 No revision
