Figure 9:
Chart of the Students’ Writing Scores in the Pretest, Cycle 1,   and Cycle 2.
Figure 9 shows that guided writing influenced students’ writing skills. Before
the  implementation  of  guided  writing,  there  was  no  student  in  the  excellent category. However, after the implementation, the frequency of excellent category
increased.  Meanwhile,  after  the  implementation  of  guided  writing,  there  was  no student in the very poor category. It can be claimed that guided writing is able to
improve students’ writing skills.
E. Discussion
Before  the  implementation  of  guided  writing  in  the  teaching  and  learning process, the students felt that writing was difficult. They got many difficulties in
writing. Based on the data collected in the reconnaissance stage, it was found that students
’  writing  skills  were  still  low  related  to  grammar,  sentence  structure,
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Cycle 2 excellent
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vocabulary  and  idea.  Therefore,  the  researcher  implemented  guided  writing  to solve those problems.
Guided  writing  facilitates  the  students  to  become  better  writers.  They  are given the  model paragraphs to build their  knowledge about a narrative text.  The
model  paragraphs  encourage  them  to  recognize  the  organization  of  the  text, vocabulary, sentence  structure and also the  language  features used  in a  narrative
text.  It  is  in  line  with  Holdich  and  Chung  2003  who  state  that  guided  writing offers  greater  opportunities  for  young  writers  to  make  valuable  connections
between  text,  sentence  and  word  level  decisions  and  help  children  shape  and redraft texts with particular criteria in mind.
Guided  writing  also  encourage  the  students  to  improve  their  writing  skills related  to  vocabulary  and  sentence  structure.  According  to  Cross  in  Reid
1993:26  ESL  writing  classes,  particularly  at  the  lower  levels  of  language proficiency,  successfully  use  guided  writing  techniques  to  build  vocabulary  and
sentence  structure  knowledge.  In  guided  writing,  their  vocabulary  mastery  is improved  by  exercises  given  by  the  teacher,  such  as  comprehension  questions
related to the model paragraphs. They are also given language based exercises that enable  them  to  practice  their  knowledge  related  to  grammar  and  sentence
structure. In  guided  writing  the  students  are  prepared  to  become  better  writers.  They
should write  independently  and  individually  at the end. Guided  writing provides oral  compositions  which  enable  them  to  prepare their  writing.  They  are  actively
involved  in  the  teaching  and  learning  process.  Therefore,  the  teaching  and