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3. Arrange these jumbled sentences into a good story. There are some pictures that can
help you to arrange the jumbled senteces.
Little Red Riding Hood
• Once upon a time, there was a girl called Little
Red Riding Hood. •
A wolf wanted to eat her but afraid to do so in public.
• The girl walked through the woods to deliver
food to her grandmother. •
She naively told him where she was going. •
He ate the grandmother and waited for the girl. •
He disguised as the grandmother. •
However, a hunter came to rescue and cut the wolf open.
• In the meantime, he went to the grandmother’s house
and gained entry by pretending to be the girl. •
When the girl arrived, he ate the girl too. •
They filled the wolf’s body with heavy stones, which killed him.
• He advised the girl to pick up some flowers.
• She really did it.
• Little Red Riding Hood and
her grandmother emerged unharmed. •
The wolf approached the girl.
Taken from Scaffolding, English for Junior High School Students, Grade VIII, p.157
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4. Read the texts carefully and correct inappropriate verbs, adjectives, prepositions,
and punctuation.
Text 1 The story of Toba Lake
once upon a time.there was a man who was living in north Sumatra. He lived above a simple hut in a
farming field. he did some gardening and fishing for his dailylife.
One day, while the man was do fishing, he catches a big golden fish in his trap. It was the big catch which he ever had in his life. Surprisingly, this fish
turned into a beautiful princess;he felt in love with her and proposed her to be his wife. She said; Yes, but you have to promise not to tell anyone about the
secret that I was once a fish, otherwise there will be a huge disaster. The man make the deal and they got
married, lived happily and had a daughter.
Few years later, this daughter would helped bringing lunch to her father out in the fields. One day, his
daughter was so hungry and she ate his father’s lunch. Unfortunately, he found out and got furious, and shouted; “You damned
daughter of a fish”. The daughter ran home and asked her mother. The mother started crying, felt sad that her husband had
broke his promise.
Then she tells her daughter to run up the hills because a huge disaster is about to come. When her daughter left, she prayed. Soon
there was a big earthquake followed by non-stop pouring rain,The whole area got flooded and became Toba Lake. She turned
into a fish again and the man became the island of Samosir.
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