b. The Evaluation and Revision of Unit 2 1 The Evaluation
As  in  unit  one,  the  evaluation  in  unit  2  also considered  in  five  aspects,  they  were  goal,  input,  activity,
layout, and instruction. The description of each aspect was presented below.
  Goal The goals of this unit were how to describe animals,
fruit,  and  vegetables.  This  unit  was  talking  about animals, fruit, and vegetables. Based on the result of
expert  judgment,  the  materials  were  relevant  with the goal of this unit.
  Input In  unit  2,  the  language  input  was  presented  in
“warming  up”,  “more  to  know”  and  “let’s  sing” parts.  The  input  given  was  about  animals’  name,
animals’ sounds, animals’ characteristics, fruit’s and vegetables’  name,  and  fruit’s  and  vegetables’
characteristics.  Based  on  the  result  of  the  expert judgment, it was suggested that in “more to know”
part  in  section  1  that  was  about  animals characteristics,  the  researcher  should  give  two
different animals with very different characteristics, so  the  students  would  learn  about  opposite
adjectives and more words.   Activity
The  activities  in  unit  2  were  in  “fun  time”,  “let’s try”, “act it out”, and “story corner” parts. The result
of  the  expert  judgment  showed  that  the  activities were  effective  and  relevant.  The  suggestion  given
was  on  the  “let’s  try”  part  in  section  one.  It  was suggested  that  the  task  would  be  better  arranged  in
easy to difficult grade.   Layout
Like  in  unit  one,  the  problem  of  the  layout  in  this unit  2  was  on  the  margin.  Every  part  should  have
the  same  margin.  In  “glossary”  part,  it  would  be better to arrange the words in order, so it was easier
for the students to memorize the words. The experts agreed  that  the  pictures  and  font  were  clear  and
interesting.   Instruction
In unit 2, every part had each instruction. The result of the expert judgment showed that the instructions
in  unit  2  were  clear  and  easy  to  understand.  Some mistakes found were about grammar error.
2 The Revision
Based  on  the  evaluation  of  the  first  draft  of  unit  2 there were some aspects from  the developed materials  that
should  be  revised.  The  revision  was  presented  in  the  table below.
Table 16: The Evaluation and Revision of Unit 2 aspect
evaluation revision
goal The materials were
relevant with the goal. no revision
input In “more to know” part
of section 1, the examples of animals had
almost the same characteristics.
Change the example of the
animals that have very different
characteristics. activity
In “let’s try” part of section 1, the task
grading should be from easy to difficult.
Rearrange the task to make the task
grading as what was suggested.
layout The margin was a little
bit mess and the “glossary” was not in
order. Rearrange the
margin. The glossary was put
based on the kinds of the words.
instruction  The instructions were Revise some words
clear and easy to understand but be careful
about the grammar. with missing
grammar.
c. The Evaluation and Revision of Unit 3 1 The Evaluation