Figure 6: The students’ end product of cycle two
Unlike  the  previous  cycle,  the  students  could  give  feedback  to  their friends’  writing in  Cycle 2 although  the  researcher  still  helped  them  in  revising
their friends’ works.  By  giving feedback to their  friends’ works, they  could also improve  their  knowledge  in  grammatical  rules,  mechanics and  also  vocabulary.
By revising their friends’, writing they were expected to learn from their friends’ mistakes and errors. The feedback was also given by the researcher. Likewise in
Cycle I, she gave feedback to students orally and written. The oral feedback was
given directly to students during the drafting stage of composing a text. By giving feedback  to  them,  the  researcher  could  improve  their  work  including  in  the
sentence  structure,  vocabulary,  mechanics,  content  and  also text  organization. They then, became aware of their mistakes.
Employing  project-based  learning  in  the  classroom  could  improve  the students’  creativity  and  cooperative  skill.  Through  project-based  learning,
students  were  motivated  in  learning  writing  since  the  activities  in  the  teaching- learning process were enjoyable and fun for them.
The  implementation  of  the  actions  and  also  the  use  of  project-based learning  in  Cycle 2 gave  significant  improvements  compared  to  the  previous
cycle.  In  brief, PBL  has  been  successful  to  make the  students  into  better performances  of  teaching  and  learning  process  in  writing  skills.  Besides,  the
motivation  and  students’  involvement  and  participation  during  the  teaching- learning process also improved.
d. Findings of Cycle 2
In Cycle 2, the researcher and the collaborators employed some improved actions with the expectation that the teaching-learning process of writing could be
more  interesting.  The  change  results  of  the  actions  during  the  teaching-learning process in Cycle I and Cycle 2 can be seen below.
Table  9: The  Change  Results  of  the  Improvement  of  the  Actions  during  the Teaching-Learning Processes in Cycle I and Cycle 2
NO. Problems
Action in Cycle I Action in Cycle 2
1.
•
The classroom
activities  lacked variation
and seemed
monotonous.
•
The  students  had low motivation in
learning English.
•
The  students  still found  it  difficult
in developing
their ideas. By
applying project-
based  learning  in  the teaching-learning
process, the
students could actively involve in
the teaching-learning
process.  They  seemed interested  and  enjoyed
the learning process. The students could build their
writing  habits  through conducting  the  project.
However,
the project
development  spent  more time
than the
time planned.
There were
some  students  in  the group
that did
not contribute  in  developing
the  project  and  just bothered other members.
Project-based learning
was  effective.    The students
were given
chances  to  have  the experience
of real
writing activity
in project-based
learning. The  students  could  work
cooperatively. In
grouping,  the  students that  tended  to  be  trouble
maker  were  separated. They  could  finish  the
project
on time.
Employing  project-based learning in the classroom
could improve
the students’  creativity  and
cooperative  skill.  Their writing
skills were
successfully improved.
2.
The  students  had difficulties
in choosing
appropriate  words when  producing  a
narrative text. The  researcher  provided
activities  and  tasks  that enable  the  students  to
enhance their vocabulary. The  students’  vocabulary
was
improved than
before the
implementation  of  the actions.
The number
of vocabulary exercises was
increased since the result of  cycle  1  test  indicated
that their vocabulary was just  slightly  improved.
Their
vocabulary mastery  was  improved
from  the  previous  cycle. They  could  deliver  their
ideas better.
3. •
The  students  had had  a  problem
with sentence
structure. The
feedback was
beneficial  for  them  to improve  their  awareness
of  grammatical  rules  and sentence  structure  and
also  help  them  to  notice and  learn  from  others’
mistakes.
The  students  were  able  to revise their friends works
although  the  researcher’s help  was  still  needed.  By
doing  this,  the  students were  more  aware  to  their
common mistakes.
It  facilitated them  to have
better understanding
continued
continued NO.
Problems Action in Cycle I
Action in Cycle 2
3. •
The  students  had had  a  problem
with sentence
structure. •
The students
often made
frequent  errors  in punctuation,
capital letters,
and spelling. However,  the  feedback
given  to  the  students were not optimal because
the
time-management was not appropriate
.
of sentence
structure especially  past  tense. It
helped  them  to  learn the language  meanings  and
constructions.
4. The  teacher  rarely
used media. The  media  was  used  to
attract  students’ attention in  learning  process.  On
the other hand, the media used  were  not  varied.
The researcher were only used  it  in  the  beginning
of the lesson. In  this  cycle,  the  use of
media  was  varied.  The students  became  more
interested  in  learning.  In addition,
their motivation  to  learn  was
increased.
C. Discussions
The  research  aimed  at  describing  how  the  use  of  project-based  learning could  improve the  writing  skills  of  grade  VIII students of  SMPN  11  Magelang.
There  are  five  aspects  of  writing  that  were  evaluated.  They are content, organization, vocabulary, language use and mechanics.
One of the main  problems  with  the  students’  writing  skill  was  students’ attitude  toward  writing  since  the  activities  in  the  classroom  was  monotonous.
Before  the  implementation  of  project-based  learning,  the  students  had  low motivation  in  learning  English,  especially  writing.  Fried-Booth  2002  say  that
PBL is potentially motivating, empowering and challenging to language learners; it  usually  results  in  building learners’  confidence,  self-esteem,  and  autonomy  as
well  as  improving  students’  language  skills,  content  learning,  and  cognitive abilities.
Moreover,  Heines in  Fragoulis  2009 states that  project-based  learning can  improve  language
skills.  As  students get  involve
in  purposeful communication  to  complete  authentic  activities,  they  have  opportunity  to  use
language in relative natural context and participate in meaningful activities which require authentic language.
The  implementation  of  project-based  learning  as  a  teaching  method  and the additional actions such as providing grammar exercises, providing vocabulary
exercises,  providing  feedback  and  making  use  of  media  were  successful  in improving  students’  writing  skills  of  the  class  VIII  C  students  of  SMPN  11
Magelang.  It  could  be  seen  from  the  improvement  of  five  aspects  of  writing including  content,  organization,  vocabulary,  language  use,  and  mechanics.  As  a
result, the students could produce better writing than before. The researcher started the research in February 2015 and ended it in April
2015.  She  implemented two  cycles  in  this  research.  There  were  some  successful and  unsuccessful  during  the  implementation  of  project-based  learning  in  the
classroom. The explanation of these two cycles is presented below:
1. The Design of Actions in Cycle I
a. The successful actions 1 The  implementation  of  project-based  learning  in the  classroom
could improve the students to write confidently.