Action and Observation Report of Cycle 2
all stories that the students composed with their groups. This time, she separated the trouble makers in the class to be not in one group. Each group was consisted
of 5 to 6 students. Moving to the next session, the researcher told the students to seat orderly
from group 1 to group 6. It was quite hard and took much time to make them seat with their groups. When all the students were sitting with their groups, she told
the students what they have to prepare for the next meeting. The time was up. She concluded the material of the lesson, reminded the students of the homework and
what to prepare in the next meeting and then ended the class.
2 Meeting 2
After opening the lesson by greeting the students, the researcher asked about their condition and checked their attendances. First of all she began the
class by reviewing the materials that the students had in the previous meeting. She asked the students about the functions and the characteristics of a narrative text.
Almost all the students answered the questions well. After that, she discussed about the students’ result of test that they had in
the previous meeting. Generally, students’ writing skills improved although the improvement was not significant. Most of them were still confused in applying
the grammatical rules. She decided to use the students’ work as the example and discussed it along with the students. She wrote down some incorrect sentences
from students’ work and invited them to correct the sentence in the board. The researcher and the students discussed it together. Before moving to the next part,
she gave the students opportunity to ask questions for the difficulties they found
related to a narrative text and for the material that they had not understood better yet.
Based on the result of Cycle 1 test, most of students also did many mistakes in punctuation. The researcher, then, reminded the students about the
principles of punctuation such as, where to put a period and coma. Besides, she also reminded the students about the use of capitalization. Many students did not
use capitalization in every beginning of the sentences. The lesson was continued by discussing the homework they had. The task
was about true-false task. This task was aimed to deepen students’ knowledge of a narrative text, so that students would be easier when they had to write one.
Because the class was so noisy and some students did not pay attention to the researcher, she asked the students that did not pay attention to read the text and
share their answers to the class. For the next session, the students were given a task. The activity in this
task was arranging the words into a good sentence. The researcher decided this activity to be homework for students because the time was almost over.
After that, the students were asked to sit with their group. In this session, they had to report their first drafts and the picture of the story to the researcher.
Some groups had finished their draft, while some other had not finished in composing their drafts yet. Then, she gave extra time for the groups that had not
finished. She monitored, helped and supervised students writing by moving from one group to the other. The project then continued in the next meeting because the
time was up. She concluded the materials of the lesson, encouraged the students to
keep their motivation high in learning and then ended the lesson by saying prayer and goodbye.
3 Meeting 3
The third meeting of Cycle 2 was held on Saturday, April 25
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2015. The researcher started the lesson by asking students’ condition and checking their
attendances. The first activity in this meeting was discussing the homework of the previous meeting. The homework was arranging words into a good sentence.
Before discussing the answer, she checked some words that the students have got before to test their vocabulary mastery. This was aimed as drilling, so it will be
easier for them to remember the words they got. Then, she asked the students to write down the answer on the board. She invited the students to discuss it actively.
Some students gave correction on the incorrect sentence. It seemed that they have understood the grammatical rules of past tense. The students were given the
opportunity to ask. However, they said to her that they have understood. After that, the students were ordered to do Task 4. The task was about
matching the words in Column A to the right past tense in Column B. In doing the task, most of them looked at the list of irregular verbs they got from the
researcher. It seemed that there was no big deal for students completing this task. The researcher reminded the students about the irregular and regular verbs. The
students, then, were given the opportunity to ask. For the next stage, the students were asked to complete the text using
words in the box and guess the meaning of some words from the text in Task 5 and 6. For these two tasks, the researcher asked them to work with their groups. It
aimed to build the connection and good relation among the students in the group thus they would be more comfortable in discussing and developing the project. In
guessing the meaning of the words task, most of them faced difficulty. They said that it was hard for them to know the meaning of the words they did not familiar
with. Before letting open the dictionary, the researcher gave explanation on how to guess the meaning. Then she led the students to open the dictionary.
The next activity was developing the project. The students continued their writing. The researcher moved around the class to monitor students’ work and
help them in doing the project. Before submitting to her, they had to exchange their writing with other groups to receive the feedback. Instead of giving
feedback, some students just enjoyed on reading of the story that their friends made. They commented on the story and made fun of it. They were very noisy and
hard to control when working with group. She reminded them to give feedback on their friends’ work and to be more serious in doing it.
Previously, each group had to write down the text they composed in a piece of paper. Then, they revised and corrected on other’s group writing. Unfortunately,
the time was almost over. Finally, the students’ works were submitted and continued to be corrected by the researcher. Before closing the class, the
researcher asked the students about their experience in developing the project. Then, she ended the class by saying prayer and goodbye.
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The time was not enough for the students to revise their work that had been given feedback. Consequently, the researcher asked them to submit their
work to get the feedback from her. She ended the class by concluding the lesson of the day, giving general feedback on students’ writing and saying goodbye.
4 Meeting 4
As usual, the researcher opened the class by greeting and checking students’ condition and attendances. In the beginning of the class, she reminded
the students of the principles of a narrative text. Next, students with their group arrange the paragraphs into a good story.
This activity was designed to make students have better understanding on the text organization of narrative text. Thus when they produced one, they could produce
it orderly. When the students had finished, the researcher and the students discussed it together. She told again about the structure organization text of
narrative to remind the students. The researcher reminded the students of the characteristics and the sentence
structure of a narrative text. She checked the students’ understanding by writing down the incorrect sentences in the board. Next, the students were asked to revise
the incorrect sentences into good sentences.
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After discussing the answers with the students, the researcher gave their writing and asked them to revise it. They were welcomed to ask her if they did not
really understand. They were given 15 minutes to revise and finish their project. When all works were complete, students and the researcher united all the works to
be in one book. They were allowed to design their works and the cover of the book.
After that, the researcher ordered the students to compose a narrative text. They were given time until the class ended. They were not allowed to open any
books including notes book, course book, and LKS. She asked them to maximize
the time they had to write as much as possible. There were many students asked about the vocabulary that they did not know. She reminded the students to check
their writing before submitting it. When the bell rang, the students were ordered to submit the result. The
class was closed by giving feedback on students’ performance and saying pray together.