The Review of the First Draft of Materials

Continued.... Tasks Evaluation Revision Task 4 The instruction is not correct. “Listen to the dialogue and fill the blanks ” The instruction is revised. “Listen to the dialogue and fill in the blanks. ”. Task 5 The task is not necessary. The task is omitted. Task 6 The task is not necessary The task is omitted. Task 7 The task is not necessary. The task is changed into the grammar focus part of unit 1. The formula is not correct. “S - Modal - V1” The formula is revised. “S - Modal - infinitive” Task 8 The task is not necessary. The task is omitted. Task 9 The task is not necessary. The task is omitted. Task 10 The picture in the task is too small. The picture is enlarged. Task 11 The task is not necessary. The task is omitted. Task 12 The picture in the task is too small The picture is enlarged. Task 13 The instruction is not correct. “Find a dialogue of hotel check-in process and analyze the expressions of asking for and offering help and write a dialogue of your own using the same expressions ” The instruction is revised. “Find a dialogue of a hotel check-in process and analyze the expressions of asking for and offering help and write a dialogue of your own using the same expressions ” Task 13 The instruction is incorrect. “In pairs, compose a dialogue of hotel check-in process and record the conversation ” The instruction is revised. “In pairs, compose a dialogue of a hotel check- in process and record the conversation. ”

b. The Evaluation and Revision of Unit 2 of the First Draft of Materials

Table 30 presents the evaluation and revision of Unit 2 of the first draft of the materials. The complete version of the final draft of the materials can be seen in Appendix I. Table 30. The Evaluation and the Revision of Unit 2 of the First Draft of Materials Tasks Evaluation Revision Task 1 The instruction should use a full stop. “Listen to the dialogue and answer the questions below ” The instruction is revised. “Listen to the dialogue and answer the questions below. ” Task 2 The task is not necessary. The task is omitted Task 3 The instruction should use a full stop. “Write down the vocabularies pronounced by the teacher and find the meanings ” The instruction is revised. “Write down the vocabularies pronounced by the teacher and find the meanings. ” Task 4 The task is not necessary. The task is omitted. Task 5 The instruction is not correct. “Listen again to the dialogue and fill the blanks ” The instruction is revised. “Listen to the dialogue and fill in the blanks. ” Task 6 The task is not necessary. The task is omitted. Task 7 The task is not necessary. The task is changed into the grammar focus part of unit 2. Task 8 The task is not necessary. The task is omitted. Task 9 The task is not necessary. The task is omitted. Task 10 The task is not necessary. The task is omitted. Task 11 The instruction should use a full stop. “In pairs, use the expressions of asking for and giving directions to find the places below and perform it in front of the class ” The instruction is revised. “In pairs, use the expressions of asking for and giving directions to find the places below and perform it in front of the class. ” Task 12 The instruction should use a full stop. “Based on the map below, compose dialogues containing the expressions of asking for and giving directions using the information provided ” The instruction is revised. “Based on the mape below, compose dialogues containing the expressions of asking for and giving directions usingthe infomation provided. ”