The Appropriateness of the Presentation

not disturb the readers. The size of fonts also should be revised in order to make the readers easy to read the texts. The lines on the box also should be straight instead of using dot lines. The expert also said that the use of pictures should be meaningful and has purposes instead of simply putting the pictures randomly. In terms of language appropriateness, there are some terms that should be replaced, such as the words “meanings” that should be changed to “Indonesian versions” and “language corner” to “grammar focus or language focus”. There are also some misspellings such as in the word „color’. 3.The Revision of Unit 1 The revision of unit 1 is based on the suggestions by the expert. The feedbacks are used to develop appropriate materials in terms of the content, the presentation, the language and the layout. The points to revise can be seen on the table below. Table 4.23 The Revision of Unit 1 Parts of the Unit Points to Revise Revision Cover The title of the developed materials contains grammatical errors. English Reading Learning Material for Computer Engineering and Networking Study Program at Vocational High School The title should be “English Reading Learning Materials for Computer Engineering and Networking Study Program at Vocational High Schools ” Add the word supervisor on the front cover. Supervisor: Jamilah, M.Pd. Title The title should be correct in term of grammar Change the title to: Well-performing and Affordable Netbooks Well-performed and Affordable Netbooks Task 1 Replace the words “one words” to “one word” Replace the words into the correct grammar. You can choose more than one word to describe the pictures. Task 2 Replace the words “one adjectives” to “one adjective” Replacing the words into the correct grammar. You may choose more than one adjective. Task 3 Give a box to the text to make it clear and make change the placement of the picture. Give a box to the text and change the placement of the picture. Task 4 No revision Task 5 No revision Task 6 Replace the word “meanings” to “Indonesian version” Replace with the correct words Indonesian version Task 7 No revision Task 8 Replace the word “meanings” to “Indonesian version” The instruction is not clear. Find the meaning of the words that you already find on the box, and then categorize them. Replace with the correct words Indonesian version Change the instruction: Find the meaning of the words that you find on the puzzle in task 7, and then categorize them. Task 9 Change the terms “language corner” to “grammar focus” There is a misspelling and incorrect use of articles Adjective isa word It is part of speech Change the terms “language corner” to “grammar focus” Change the misspelling and correct the articles An adjective is a word It is a part of speech Task 10 No revision Task 11 The source of the text should be placed on the right corner Place the link source on the right corner The placement of the text have to be more clearer Change the text’s placement The pictures is better to be placed in the middle, not on the right side Place the pictures in the middle The instruction should be clearer. Change the instruction and separate task 11 into two tasks.