Task 5 Change the order of task 5 to
task 3 Change the order of the task
Task 6 There is an inappropriate use
of preposition. I would like to ask you to go
out with me on computer exhibition.
Change the sentence into the correct one.
I would like to ask you to go out with me to a computer
exhibition.
Task 7 It is better to add numbering to
the explanation of memos’
parts heading, identity, body, signature
Give numbers to the parts of memo.
1. heading 2. identity
3. body 4. signature
1. Task 8
No revision Task 9
No revision Task 10
Change the word “meanings” to “Indonesian versions”.
Incorrect use of preposition. Change the word into the
correct ones. You may check them in your
dictionary.
Task 11 No revision
Task 12 The
instruction needs
a revision in term of grammar
The networking service just gets a big project...
Change into the correct one. The networking service has
just got a big project...
Task 13 The font of the input text is too
small. Change the font to make the
text readable. Task 14
Change the word “meanings” to “Indonesian versions”.
Change the word into the correct ones.
Task 15 No revision
Task 16 No revision
Task 17 The task should be added with
an example Give an example on task
number 1. Task 18
No revision Task 19
No revision Task 20
No revision Glossary
Replace the words “Indonesian Meanings” to “Indonesian
versions” Replacing
the words
“Indonesian Meanings” to “Indonesian versions”
3. The Revision of Unit 3
4.33 The Revision of Unit 3 Parts of the Unit
Points to Revise Revision
Task 1 No revision
Task 2 Give a box to the text
to make it clear and change the placement
of the source link on the right corner of the
text. Give a box to the text
and change
the placement
of the
source link
Task 3 No revision
Task 4 Change the colours of
the box since they are considered disturbing
the readers. Change the colours of
the box so that they do not disturb the
readers.
Task 5 Give a box to the text
to make it clear and change the placement
of the source link on the right corner of the
text. Give a box to the text
and change
the placement
of the
source link
Task 6 Inappropriate use of
preposition Recall the underlined
sentences
on the
text.... Change
the instruction into the
correct one. Recall the underlined
sentences
in the
text.... Task 7
Give an example on the task
Give an example on number 1 and change
the instruction.
Task 8 There is an incorrect
spelling. Edmodo
can be
applied effectivelyin the classroom.
Change the spelling into the correct one.
Edmodo can
be applied effectively in
the classroom. Task 9
No revision Task 10
There is
a Change the sentence
grammatical error on the question number
4. What kind of videos
you
can find
on YouTube?
into the correct one. What kind of videos
can
you find
on YouTube?
Task 11 No revision
Task 12 The word choice in
the instruction is not appropriate. The word
“within” should be changed to “in”
Change the
instruction: Find the meanings of
the terms below that you
can find
in YouTube text task
9. Task 13
No revision Task 14
The instruction
should be clearer Study the following
text and change the active verbs into the
passive form. Make the instruction
clearer. Study the following
text and put the verbs in the brackets into
the passive form.
Task 15 No revision
Task 16 The word choice in
the instruction is not appropriate. The word
“within” should be changed to “in”
Change the
instruction: Find the meanings of
the terms below that you can find in the
text entitled PayPal
Task 17 No revision
Task 18 No revision
Task 19 The text is should be
based on the report texts
instead of
descriptive texts. There should be an
explanation
about report text
Change the
instruction of task 19 Give
explanation about report texts
Task 20 No revision
Glossary Replace the words
“Indonesian Meanings”
to “Indonesian versions”
Replacing the words “Indonesian
Meanings” to
“Indonesian versions”
APPENDIX I
The Final Draft of the Materials
