She wanted to say sorry to her best Then she opened her mother’s second letter.
299. The day before, they had
put all their sewing needles on the ground.
Sehari sebelumnya mereka sudah menancapkan
jarum- jarum jahit mereka ke jalanan.
Modulasi 159
300. You can imagine what
happened when the enemy came to attack.
Kau bisa bayangkan apa yang terjadi saat musuh
datang menyerang. Literal.
160
301. Most of them no more could
walk no more. Kebanyakan dari mereka
tidak lagi bisa berjalan. Literal.
161 302.
The rest were not so fortunate because suddenly
there was a rain of knitting needles, hairbun , pins,
spoon,forks, pots, pans, and laddles.
Yang lainnya juga tidak terlalu beruntung karena
tiba – tiba datanglah hujan jarum rajut, tusuk
konde, sendok,garpu, dan sendok sayur.
Tranposisi 161-
162
303. Followed by flying saucers
Diikuti dengan piring – piring yang
berterbangan. Transposisi
163
304. And last but not last but not
least.... a blizzard of hot porridge.
Terakhir, datanglah badai bubur panas.
Transposisi 164
305. Soon all the enemy’s army
were tied up with cloth line. .......Musuh – musuh..... itu
sudah diikat. Transposisi
165 306.
At last, all the men were freed.
Dan semua pria dari desa mereka pun dibebaskan.
Kompensasi
307 From that day on, the
inhabitants of the fertile village by the river
continued to live in peace. Sejak hari itu, penghuni
desa subur di tepi sungai itu terus hidup dengan
damai. Transposisi
167
308. No body else dared to attack
this village Tidak ada lagi yang berani
menyerang desa ini. Literal
168 309.
Because Everybody knew that it was protected by a
troop of mothers. Karena semua tahu ini desa
ini di lindungi oleh pasukan ibu – ibu.
Kompensasi 168
JUDUL X : My Mother and At The Docter’s Waiting Room Aku dan Ibuku di Ruang Tunggu Dokter
Pengarang dan Penerjemah : Arleen Amidjaja Ilustrator
: Vidya
Data Bahasa Sumber Bahasa Sasaran
Teknik Penerjemahan
Hal
310. My mother and I at the
doctor’s waiting room.
Aku dan ibuku di ruang tunggu dokter
Transposisi 169
311. One day, I was not feeling well.
Suatu hari, aku merasa tidak enak badan.
Penambahan 170
312. So my mother took me to a doctor.
Jadi ibu membawaku ke dokter.
Literal 170
313. “Will it hurt?” I asked
my mother anxiously.
“ Nanti sakit tidak,ya?” tanyaku pada ibu dengan
khawatir. Kompensasi
171