The Review of the First Draft of the Materials
find this following sentence should be revised.
4, you find this sentence.
The explanation The other expressions used to ask for
instruction should be revised. The explanation revised into The
other expressions used to ask for instruction are:
The expression Do you have experience of…?should be
revised. The expression was revised into Do
you have the experience of …?
The words first, second, third, fourth, … should be revised.
The words were revised into firstly, secondly, thirdly, fourthly, …
Task 7 The task is arranging sentences
into a correct order. The task was changed into practice
the dialogue and stating true or false. Arranging sentences was moved into
task 8. Task 8
The sentence number 4 First, park your car in a flat surface.
Then place a wheel chock behind the rear tire if you are fixing the
front wheel bearing should be revised.
The sentence number 4 was revised into Firstly, park your car in a flat
surface. Then, place a wheel chock behind the rear tire if you fix the
front wheel bearing.
Task 9 The task was about the transition
signal. The task was changed into
completing and practicing dialogue. The transition signal was moved into
task 10. Task 10
Task 10 was about matching games.
Task 10 was changed into transition signal. The game was moved into
Task 12. The instruction should be revised;
In the task 4, you find these sentence:
The instruction was revised into In Task 4, you find these sentence:
An article was missing. An article was added.
Task 11 The task was about practicing the
dialogue in pairs and answering the questions about telling
someone to do something. The task was changed into exercise
for transition signal as the scaffolding from Task 10.
Task 12 The task was about identifying
expressions for telling someone to do something.
The task was revised into matching games about asking and giving
instruction from Task 10. Task 13
The task was the explanation about expressions used for telling
someone to do something. The task was revised into listening
and stating true or false.
Task 14 The sentence “That’s easy. It’s
done, and what next?” should be revised.
The sentence was revised into “That’s easy. It’s done, and what’s
next?” The preposition, article, and
conjunction were missing. The preposition, article, and
conjunction were added. The instruction “State true or
false based on the information on the dialogue above” should be
revised. The instruction was revised into
“State whether the following statements are true or false based on
the information on the dialogue above.”
Task 15 The articles in the exercise were
missing. The articles in the exercise were
added. Task 16
The instruction “Work in a group of three and find a procedure of
repairing cars or engines. Make a dialogue based on the text that
you have find, and practice it in front of the classroom” should be
revised. The instruction was revised into
“Work in a group of three and find a procedure of repairing cars or
engines. Make a dialogue based on the text that you have found, and
practice it in front of the classroom.”