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The first reason is the problem on deletion for example he in Datum No. 004
is deleted. There are 3 data or 14.29 deleted which cause them unaccepted. Second, there is problem on clarity, which derives from literal translation
strategy, as what happens on Datum No. 54 her is translated into –nya in
which it is preceding by –nya too. There are 23.81 data causing this problem. The last problem is problem on culture. This problem is also derived
from literal translation strategy. Problem on culture is divided into problem on choice of word that suggests choosing kamu instead of kau, and problem on
addressing parents he should be translated into ayah instead of dia; Datum
No. 099. There are 7 data 33.33 that belong to problem on choice of word and 6 data 28.57 for problem on addressing parents.
Recommendations
By doing this research, I found things that I wanted to present them as suggestions.
1. Translator
I could not say that the translator does not have any competency at all in translating for her score on both accuracy and acceptability is remarkable.
Yet, I still found problems that are culturally bound. From this, I suggest the translator, and other translators, to pay much attention to the target readers’
cxxxix cultural life. Furthermore, the text is a children storybook in which parents
may expect to teach their children through the book, for example, the way to address other people.
2. Other Researcher
I do believe that my research is still on the surface structure of analysis. Therefore, I hope there will be researchers who are interested in analysing
personal references in a deeper understanding. For example, there will be analysis on the effect of strategies used to translate towards the target readers’
personality. Besides, since my research is a book-oriented research, the next researcher is expected to do target reader – oriented research.
I also want to recommend for other researchers who work using scales to pay very much attention on the scales. I hope when they take someone’s scales or
theory, they will consider whether or not the scales or theory are suitable and applicable for the research.
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